Crew Rap

[Pgb Gangsta]

This about one Fag at are school
Feed Please this be my 3 Written Rap:

Verse 1
P-H-S
Yo welcome to a Deadly Hotzone aka ghetto//
Slip one word wrong and youll be burried with Metal//
PGB Prays here,gangster's have turned this place into a rental//
We once had a English teacher name Long,Smoked a Bong and went Mental//

Hook
Yo,We From Da Ghetto OF P-h-s,P-G-B nigga better den da rest//
Slip one word wrong and youll be layin in a Chest//

Verse 2,
Yo one boi from down south,came on ma turf and started runnin his mouth//
P-G-B got to work Quickly,stompted him,lashed him,smashed him leave him in a bad state
Of Health//
God Dam Pussy Gave check to a chick,He got knocked more then the South ShelveZ//
Member of tha crew then stod up,Hit him in tha Gut made him Hurl-z//

Hook
Yo,We From Da Ghetto OF P-h-s,P-G-B nigga better den da rest//
Slip one word wrong and youll be layin in a Chest//

Verse 3
Keepin it Real, Be da Moto, Who knows After this i may win da loto/lato//
Gettin adive From Tha True G, Soon gonna be hard gettin away from a photo//
Theres a inspiration in everyones life, Mines 2pac but he got shoto//
Gotta be carefull bout what ya rap, because we be liven in a Getto/ghetto//

Hook
Yo,We From Da Ghetto OF P-h-s,P-G-B nigga better den da rest//
Slip one word wrong and youll be layin in a Chest//

Verse 4
"One Chance to hit this shit"or end up at tha bottom of tha Pit//
Rappin like a Pro with tha Help of ma Crew,Bouncin From Clit-Ta-clit//
Ma Homie G gangsta Can beatbox, we be rippin shit up Bit-ba-Bit
We always Gonna be frontpage Shit,All the other Bitches can leave the candle Light//
But theres always some who gets in your way, A gay Mofo who cant stand up to this height//
Sittin in tha Front Row of class "WHat A Geek"Sits back cause he knows he cant stand the Meight//
Got "Mauled By tha P-G-B"and knoked off by stage Frieght//
Chased all the way to tha phs bus by tha black knight//
Coon swinged and left right/ed//

Hook
Yo,We From Da Ghetto OF P-h-s,P-G-B nigga better den da rest//
Slip one word wrong and youll be layin in a Chest//

Closer
This be a warning from Da PGb,Dude u better not fuck with me//
Cause there always one 'i' on tha sea-See//
CLose ya mouth and tha better ull be//

[K-Loc]

I was feelin the topic of ya flow but ya structure n' wordplay needs to be elevated man keep workin on that shit, I see a lot of potential ~1

[Mind Force]

I think you should work on the multies and worplay. Vocab is always a decent thing to include in any pice you write. For a diss I wasnt really feeling a lot of it but I think that if you had more punches it would be better .Shortened bars and a better structure would help out.

My Fav. Bar / Bars
PGB Prays here,gangster's have turned this place into a rental//
We once had a English teacher name Long,Smoked a Bong and went Mental//

Keepin it Real, Be da Moto, Who knows After this i may win da loto/lato//
Gettin adive From Tha True G, Soon gonna be hard gettin away from a photo//

Included some what of a multi wich helped the flow out a bit...

My Least Liked Bar / Bars

Yo,We From Da Ghetto OF P-h-s,P-G-B nigga better den da rest//
Slip one word wrong and youll be layin in a Chest//

It got a little boring and if you added a bar or two more to the hook it would improve

[The Do Boy]

weak and whack, elavate on creativity, and everything else on this one cause it sucked nuts....

[Johnny 6-feet]

Closed. One drop per 24 hours only.