Week 7 -evil king (0 - 0) Vs yung ghost (0 - 0)

[one way]

bad baron

So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
that was gay
.
.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
no
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
wtf is with the midle line, do you know what flow is
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
(meaning ass)
ok, I had enough, ext guy


baby no-show

heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
thats lame, just ecause its wordplay doesn't make it a hard line
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
ok,
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
decent, you allready won, so I'm done reading



vote young ghost all though he had more stretch lines tha Oprah Winnfry

[Stephen Mayfield]

So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
no
.
.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
played, but meh
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
no
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
need better wording, woulda been funny
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
heh
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
sure this has been used before, but heh


vs.


heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
with this bar alone, you proved your flow was weaker
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
nah
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
rofl no
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
no
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
omg im done.
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
nop


Vt/ Evil King .......both of yall need severe elevation.....first young work on your structure and FLOW....you have no flow, it was like readin a damn threatening letter from a fourth grader.....shorten your bars, you dont need three line bars either, you should only EVER do that...if you are good enough to......Evil...work on ya creativity....you can form a punch, but your concepts are trash....

[Piff Jones]

So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
nah
.
.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
played
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
nah
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
needs wording
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
no
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
old concept, didnt flip it good


vs.


heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
you need a better flow/structure
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
meh
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
so fucking played
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
nah
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
wow nooooo
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
gay joke .
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
nope, gestures isnt really the champ...


V/ Evil king.

I basically just picked you. You didn't win by much at all. Maybe like one of you punches wasn't as wack? Damn, you two, blitz, and nymph need the most help in the league. Elevate.

[evil king]

5-2

[Black Symmetry]

i heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
no
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
ok
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
played
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
played concept
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
corny...
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
meh
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
ok

vs.



So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
.
.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
ok
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
played concept
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
meh
(meaning ass)
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
nah
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
meh

*very hard battle, both dropped stretched and had bad concepts, it seems repetitive...

but by better quality

V/Evil

[Nashvillain]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326595
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326618

some links

[kid sick']

So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
meh
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
meh
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
ok
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
lol
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
no
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
meh

vs

i heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
no
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
na
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
meh
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
nope
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
ok
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
wtf
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
no


v/Evil

He had a better verse and yung dropped more then he was supose to anyway lol

[evil king]

7-2

[Alphabetized]

Very weak battle here..

Evil- Pretty weak verse, nothing really surprised me.. average noobish
style punching. Your opener wasn't very hard, nor was it direct..
but the concept was there. Keep working on wording.

Yung - If sneeky voted for you, I KNOW i'm making the right decision.
You had 0 consistancy in this, and even the lines I thought from
you that were decent.. din't pack much flare with them.


Evil takes this for SLIGHTLY better punches.

Vote- Evil

[evil king]

8-2

[Taz™]

e.king


So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
^lol

relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
^ok . i felt this could have been worded better

your verse was ok, direct those i quoted is what i felt were the strongest'
the rest were still connecting all tho, not really a stand out

VS

Ghost

i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
^i like this kind of punches...tho its not much appriciated

you verse has to many played lines in it,..
i would advice u to freshen up ur concepts,
then ull probably come up as a threat , so avoid played lines

Vote: Evil King- for coming w/ a stronger verse

[darealMaRV]

evil king
So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
^^^OK I WAS FEELIN YA RYHME SCHEME N DA MULTI MADE IT EVEN BETTA..DA PUNCH WAS MEH
.
.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
^^^OK
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
^^NA
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
^^MEH
(meaning ass)
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
^^^U COULD OF MADE DIS DOPE
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
^^NAH


yung ghosti heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
^^^ITS LOOK LIKE U TOOK EVIL STYLE...DA PUNCH WAS WEAK BUT YA RYHME SCHEME WAS GOOD
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
^^^MEH
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
^^^^PLAYED
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
^^^FILLER LINES R SUPER PLAYED
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
^^^OK
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
^^^LOL
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
^^^NO


V/EVIL

[Flying Carcass]

So much punch's my fist might replace where his rips at.
L's are common but his wins slack.
cuz last time he did that^^^ fat joe hadda fuckin six pac.
^Okay.
hot crew?thats a lil overcredit I would say his rosters mild.
Family guy?yeh cuz
kid gets sonn'ed so much I mistook him for a foster child.
^No.
I would've went harder here but beating you I tried nice.
battled his crew now him.......looks could kill?
na becuz if that was the case I would've been died 2wice.
^Meh.
relationships?he's got 1..............wit losin N' its not love.
would've drop half ass but dats sumthin u'll neva be on top of.
^No.
its like pimp battles the way this fag gets easily whored.
yung ghost?now dat explains Y he texts bad like luigi boards.
^Meh.
u a fuckin playa? prolly 2 losin cuz this ain't a damn game.
its good I joined
cuz now I could hand this jr L's like the leagues damn name.
^Fuck no.

vs.

i heard LLL jr. went down hill,but by far evils got the weakest flow
i had 2 inform him,cuzz he needs 2know
with his "artificial" rhymes...now watch me beat this hoe till he's "sweat and low"
^No.
always talkin bout movin crack...ima expose you,bring this faker out
cause young'n
the last time you "pitched white"....was when you threw it on your paper route
^Meh.
i dont know wat ur thinkin,you beat me?..pshh..u got it twisted like dread lox
cuzz the only time this kid packs a punch....it's beside a sandwich in his lunch box
^Punch/Juice wordplay is played.
i already know the ending....you'll end up in a hurse,cuzz im killer
yea everybody has a few......but your whole verse is a filler
^No.
your fuckin ugly,but it aint my fault...4 that,your fathers who's to thank
u talk about clappin folks,but how can u...when ur 15 years old,still shootin blanks!
^Meh.
grip the trigga on the twelve guage,bukshots spray...like usher i'll let it burn
so can you please hop off my dick....at least long enough so your girl can get a turn
^Okay.
you got beat....its not the end of the world,ur only 15 come back when ur grown
he's been demoted 2 gesture.....after i tackled him off his thrown
^Meh.

Whack battle.

\\//Evil

[D.Silver]

11 - 2 to evil king. TKO

evil king Wins - Pm your links
yung ghost Loses (0 - 1)