Week 12 - Kid Blitz (3 - 6) Vs yung ghost (3 - 2)

[Kris Stubbs]

Really close battle. lol @ yung losin


Yung-you came played as hell. You kind of put a different twist on some of your lines. But still overall i think your verse was played. Your punches weren't really all that strong. Personals from YOU should have been dope against kid, regardless if yall have battled before. Weak verse man.

knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!

^prolly your best bar, But STILL played. I have seen that used so many different people.


Kid-for some reason. I never really like any of your verses. I dont like your wording most of the time. Half your verse is usually statements, not punches.
Sometimes you kick out a personal or 2..but other then that kind of basic. You did eh in this battle. best bar from you was probably your closer. You still worded this whole verse badly, but you had some what different concepts.


I got blitz takin this barely, more consistent with less played shit.

[Nashvillain]

go fuk urself ghost doesnt matter who the fuck u r i still vote honestly. u can see how close this battle was from the votes u piece of shit. dont go to the lounge talking shit.

y do you think i took it to the lounge,dont freepost in my battle dumbass...2-2...uppin this for more votes

[Relli_Mak]

lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
aight..
3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
nah..
blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
meh..
so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
aight..
it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
lol..think I heard somethin similar b4..or maybe not..cool
knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
aight..
his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
1/2 okay..1/2 played..
4.5/10

Vs.

I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
hmm..nah..
bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
nah..
You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
meh..
I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
meh..
predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
a bit played..
How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
aight..
Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls!
a bit weak..
3.0/10

Above reasons, v/ goes to Ghost..

[kid sick']

lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
ok
3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
no
blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
no
so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
na man
it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
ok
knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
ooooookkkkkkkkk
his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
na

vs

Yung Ghosts' is the worst...
I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
na
bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
ok
You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
no
I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
no
predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
ok
How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
meh
Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls
ok

This battle could really go either way.. Um both had there down points and there good points. Overall I would have to go with..


v/Kid blitz.


I picked him out of a hat..




Lol na Liked his verse a little bit better...

[Nashvillain]

3-3...uppin this for some more votes

[Rule.]

yung ghost-

lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
- ok

3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
- eh, pretty weak.

blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
- more of an empty threat. its like.. so what?

so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
- eh ok

it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
- lol no.

knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
- pretty cool

his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
- lol, that is so forced and played. sorry.

vs.

kid blitz-

I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
- nah

bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
- bleh.. didnt hit hard imo

You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
- weak man.

I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
- wack lol

predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
- needed rewording, idea was there tho.

How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
- naw

Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls
- again, rewording woulda made the concept/punch better.


overall, this wasnt that great of a battle, but I think yung edged this for the simple reason that he came better with less played lines. Blitz, your downfall was wording. Had some good ideas, just didnt connect. work on that wording kid.. you'll get it.

v. yungin'

[Black Symmetry]

3-4 upppin for votes...

[Resistance]

knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
Good.

Vs.

Nothing mentionable..


YG, you had some decent lines, but rest was blah..u should've went harder, but you BARELY beat blitz here..

Blitz didn't have much quotable's..but had decent ones, but weren't quotable for me..

V/yung ghost

[Nashvillain]

5-3...

[The Vortex]

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IP: AED0 417A


lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
ok

3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
worded badly.but coo still

blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
nah

so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
coo personal

it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
nah

knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
nah

his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
ok

vs


Yung Ghosts' is the worst...
I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
k
bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
NO.wizack
You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
ok
I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
wizack......NO!

predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
ha coo

How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
nah

Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls!
ha ok , coo

vote yung

another battle where i expected to see high level punches coming from people who give feed like they are wording and punch experts and NOT delivering the goods themselves. so im like wat da fux up wit that
kid had a couple of cool bars and a bunch of meh and nah bars,
yung was more consistant with the overall decency of bars and topped it off with a coo personal that made his verse fresher

YOU up ya games also

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[zelf]

lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
ok
3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
bad wording, weak
blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
no
so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
ok personal
it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
gay
knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
Enough with the dome shit wtf, NO
his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
no


vs




Yung Ghosts' is the worst...
I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
meh
bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
nah
You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
decent
I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
Gay
predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
iight
How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
Nah
Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls!
ok


vote: kid bltz for coming better

[-Coop-]

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Yung Ghost
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lame it's all a game....and i got this lil bitch under controll,see
get em outta here,he's played out and for god sakes he's 3-6 D.
Nah... 0.5/2
3 wins so you gotta lil hype now?,kid blitz you better pipe down
or ima beat you with it till it matches ur text carrer...in the ground!
Ehh... statement-ish. 0.5/2
blitz your a fuckin KID,this little bitch will never take the throne
want wordplay?,while you try to slide by,im swinging....bars at ur dome
So-so. 1/2
so easy im startin to yawn...cause blitz you got me bored dude
your goin down in history.....wait,that was just the last time i whored you!
This was ok, no wit in it though. 1/2
it was a K.O last time and we all know ya wack,u drop heat,i doubt
blitz tryed 2 penetrate the O-lineman...
...so he turned around and punched him in the mouth!
? Nah... I just aint feelin it. 0.5/2
knock blitz outta the park...with a punch rite to ya dome bitch
i would ^....but that be fucked up cuzz then he'd be homeless!
So-so, but, this is kinda played. 1/2
his bitch got big teeth,so really theres not much action in the bed
and blitz bites just like his girl...so looks like he'll never get A-head
Worded poorly. 0.5/2

- 5/14 -
This verse was below average. No quoteables, and only a few were even decent. I guess the first step for you would be to think of better, more effective concepts. Then your wording. Then you'll be aight.


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Kid Blitz
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Yung Ghosts' is the worst...
I Flicka through tramplin this little girl's playoff hopes' in the dirt
...but i can't...cuz this guy needs scrapped off the concrete first!
Ehhh... so-so. 1/2
bitch'll mimic the shot clock, a loud shriek with frightened looks
simple...dudes the long ass verse...dragged to my finishing hook
Nah, worded poorly. 0.5/2
You've been in the dopest~shadows...so let the ditch efforts begin
but its okay, hes fine...laying in the only place his' kind fits in
Poor concept. 0.5/2
I fashion punches to connect with all the species of probable folk
Frosts stretched the limits & then came homosexual ghosts
Weak statement, gay jokes are played. 0.5/2
predictions feel ghost'll edge out...plz show me this amazing gift
and hes' the fall out boy...guess' why hes accustomed to cliffs
Almost decent, but where's the punch though??? 1/2
How can u skip me...wonderin headfirst in a faggot's innocence
and hes' on a playoff run...why...with a death PRE~Emanate!
Your wording needs improvement. 0.5/2
Dude, face it, your far from nice...and I'm Raw for exposin a GHOSTs' flaws
and I didn't know ghosts' lead their lives...getting Punched through walls!
I didn't know where the PUNCH was. Read the 2nd line, it really wasn't dissin him. 0.5/2

- 4.5/14 -
Man, wording killed you here. The way you worded stuff... I could see what you were trying to get out, but it came out as either a statement, or just plain weak. Nothing really stood out.


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VOTE: YUNG GHOST
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[D.Silver]

7 - 4 to yung ghost & Winner

yung ghost Wins (4 - 2)
kid blitz Loses (3 - 7)