LLL HW Title: SmokaJoka 8-2 vs. Ancel 10-5

**Axeshun** · October 7th, 2007, 05:13 PM

peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
Nice shit...
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
Lmao, nice
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
This was nice aswell
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
Ok
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
lmao ok..
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
nah...
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
cool

vs

Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
Dope, brutal shit
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
Lol cool...
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
HAHA, thats fucked up...atleast he tries
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
BRUTAL.
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
Bleh, this was a bit weaker
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
Cool shit..
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
Ok...

LMAO dope battle imo...this was a cool ass display of personals and punches mixed by both.

V- Smoka for consistency of better lines

**Lay Doubt.** · October 7th, 2007, 06:37 PM

peeps say your above me, they don't think you'll get toppled b
so i always where a helmet...to prevent bullshit from falling on top of me
lol got a chuckle, cool opener.
man your shit's deadly...literally i peeped the soundclick with no answer
your music's so square repeating smoka could cause lung cancer
ha never seen a square/cigarette wordplay yet, pretty funny.
The leagues bundled up, fuck it i'll just walk over the son of luck
it's good joka can laugh at his own shit...it makes one of us
eh..you fucked up the wording on this.
he's good to teach the young, & show just what a real mod can do
i've seen smoka pack a punch...sandwich, and some other shit for school
lol clownage, not too hard hitting though.
the regular season nearing its end so quick it feels like illusion
so the last weak...pretty much sums up my opponents conclusion
pretty common wordplay, but cool flip.
why did we have to wait so long for smokas pics? see i been known...
you had the face of a ghost, which turned out to be a natural skintone
rofl ouch.
damn im killin' you dude, bossin up you must feel like your tough
but your shit comes off as smooth, stainless...shit anything but rough
coulda worded it better, but it's still cool as is.

vs.

Ancel gettin the title? no, we already know you ain't droppin top notch
Sucha square, this fuckas chalk outline'll look like a game of hop scotch
yeah his square wordplay did kinda make this lose some of it's effectiveness, but it's still good.
And you ain't no gangsta, so when I roll through ya hood..you dead bitch
Treat you like McDonald's when I drive-thru in less than 30 seconds
eh, kinda obvious to me dude..
So fuck outta here, you ain't winnin this cuz ya soon to be minced meat
Only fucking title you get, is leader of most crews that die within a week
seen title wordplays like this, cool personal twist to it though.
You a fragile faggot, so block and duck if ya want..but I wouldn't advise it
Cuz you gettin battered son, then it's lights out....like a Chrit diet
hmm i actually wasn't feeling this too much to be honest.
You causin riots and ya won't make friends spittin that shit in a concert
But hey...
After the show you'd fit into a crowd..of medical examiners and doctors
another threat punch like your last line, this was ok.
As for ya girl? well I wasn't gonna say much....but I know this
Ancel never sleeps alone....his trailer got plenty of roaches
seen roach lines before, it was a cool flip though.
And how the fuck are you even in this match cuz I hate to say I told ya
But when I first set this battle it was LLL HW: ...?... vs. SmokaJoka
nah c'mon man..wack closer. no punch really.

yeah i dunno what it is about smoka's verses, but i usually don't like the lines a lot of people do. i think it's probably your wording that throws them off for me. ancel's verse came off as more polished and harder hitting to me. looks like smoka's gonna win anyway but i thought ancel got this though..best i've seen him come in a while..

v/ Ancel.

peace.