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Thread: That Meaningful Ring

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    Conquering Lion Prince Escobar's Avatar
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    That Meaningful Ring

    Umm i been stuck in drama and had to get down, it may seem confused cause i put it raw but i hope u can get some insight, the title aids to give away my grief...

    rubix cubin boring bars my style attract the sky and lure in stars~
    heart and soul the world's collide to survive i finish my encore on mars~
    im never misuderstood my scriptures plain my blood and tears stain my under eyes~
    my soul closed and sold to Lucifer for the juice of her thunder thighs~
    wasted existence aggravated losses induced by infectious t&a~
    but the essence in living on corners is to rock well and agree wit nay's~
    my train of thought skipped a track my mental journey lost in my mental cage~
    but the bird in my head doesnt sing of joy and peace i'll destroy the streets in a dented rage~
    let lockjaw seep in and let my loss of flow flood my wildest dyslexic driven night hauntings~
    picturin real poets emerging messiahs pure as diamonds without ice flossing~
    but the block's gripping fears has closed minders tipping queers~
    i dont agree but in ignorance i'll lose mind and flip a peer~
    back on the correct route for thought losin my mind herded by evil intent~
    a night alone in my bed without shorty will result in a cerebral dent~
    i cant find my thought process with closed eyes im willingly lost see~
    my whole tale is of a ring in the gutter only Lauren can comfort but shes Killing Me Softly~
    1luv.
    Last edited by Prince Escobar; August 7th, 2003 at 02:37 AM
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    upward you go, elevation is key, feedback??? 1luv.
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    Nice work.Seems like she meant alot to you.But trust me u will get over her.Keep Droppin.Im out~1~

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    Decent Drop That Flowed Exceptionally Well
    And Had A Slight Abstract Factor From The
    Get Go...It Caught My Attention And You
    Kept A Decent Rhyme Scheme At Parts That I
    Thought It Would Branch Off You Kept It On Point..

    What Was I Thinking...This Was Nicely Done Homie
    Im Still Thinking On Topics...The Tournaments About
    To Start Soon And Ive Just Been Writing A Lot To
    Sharpen Myself Up...Good Luck To You If You Enter
    Forreal Forreal..Peace
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    thanks to both and yeh BB she did mean a lot, 1luv.
    Laying face down in the mainstream.
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    The obscurely contstructed lines provided enticingly 'familiar' abstract imagery giving the emotions/motions of the 'situation' a depth of which i dug (especially in a personal way).

    Most definetly dug all the way through. Even if it was a piece quite a bit within yourself/itself (more so the former). Cos hey, i do it too...

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