ah i liked it you fucking nazis! the rhymes were clever and added an element tot he piece which made it easier to bare with the tiny font. i think you kept the level of thought to a good degree in this, the ideas expressed in the poem are complicated and convoluted but you guys expressed them in a way that we can understand. it's good stuff guys. I think you could have condensed this a bit, although the length did give it a Whitmanian feel. You guys surprised me some with this one. I see a lot of growth since I last checked out your writings. congrats in keeping my attention up! this would be ill as a performance piece btw
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