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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you

    vs.

    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz


    good battle. chrit.. you dropped a respectable verse and you had quite a few highlights. that windsor knot concept was in a kungfu verse before so i didnt count that one as a quote even though the concept was worthy of it.. im not saying it was bitten, but i looked over it for being played. all in all, your verse was pretty witty.. it wasnt anything amazing, but it was a solid verse.

    token.. you killed the shit imo. you were more direct and had more sting. i quoted alot of your punches and i probably could of quoted one or two more that i left out, but you were consistent throughout the majority of ur verse. you definitly beasted this..

    vote - token


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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    No doubt this faggot is frazzled, say goodbye to this truculent bastard
    We'll all catch Token on the flipside... of cheating occurring in battles
    ok opener, i mean its a personal but t ome flipped in no way where it actually just damage, just stating it.
    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    ehh ok!
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    this was predictable right here, i think you woulda flipped it abit harder.
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    i don't get this, really.
    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    ehh this was ok, abit corny to me!
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    i don't see how this is hard man, i mean i obviously get it but nothing hard for me!
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    LOL haha abit corny, but shit is roflz. i like!
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    ahh man, sick concept but i don't like the way you executed it, it's meh..you just called him a bum!
    star told me she's sick of ur small dick, you aint ever workin the box kid
    and to her, a Token nitrate... shitty enough to fertilize crops with
    lol this was pretty nice!
    The way ur advancin is wrong, you cant hide ur mischevious plot
    cause the way token always conceals... his legacy as cheat n a fraud
    dude your gettin way too repetitive w.this style here, this line was ok
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke
    lol naw man not feeling this, and i think ya wording fucks it up!
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging
    ehh i've seen this before, but won't let it take away from it, pretty nice
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you
    LOL nice closer!
    OK bar, I mean you had some personals dude but i think you just didn't execute them to their fullest potential man. and then this style '...' wow way too repetitive, i mean it made ya read predictable a few times and all, and just some of ya punches didnt hit as hard for me.

    vs.

    fuck what u did to cry, i'm droppin early so you'll reap misery
    ur the rightful title holder.... of making finals as the biggest bitch in league history
    ugh, this style again haha and meh the opener i wasn't feeling!
    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    damn, even though this is hype i think it hit hard, i mean basically saying Bar ain't shit!
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    ehh, another one but not as hard...really didnt do anything!
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    hmm...not liking here man, i mean the flip on it is ok, just not effective for me!
    faggot steals lines from his favorite battlers, so you know this dude'll be beat
    just watch Bartender mix with some Henny & make the world's first chewable drink
    ehh ok!
    bitch is stuck living in the past.. he's washed up, I feel bad for the poor guy
    cuz if it's 'come hell come high water'..... we'll find Chrit laying shoreside
    nice line, i was liking this right here, creative!
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an
    Aussie
    ehh seen too many similar like this, and the execution i wasn't feeling!
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    hmm, ok ima say i like this cuz its a nice idea, but your wording messes it up some dude.
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    decent right here, lil corny though!
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    ok!
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    LOL nice!
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz
    this was decent right here!
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting
    NICE closer!
    but same w.the style man, too much use is a no no.

    ok it's hard to call this, i mean cuz ima be honest and say most of the verses were miss for me, maybe cuz the style that i've grown fond of but yeh, just i think both had some lines that were ok and coulda been harder, but ima have to go w.consistency and say Token barely edges this out.

    Token wins.
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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you

    vs.

    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting

    Chrit had 3 dope ass hits...the seed/bun line was prolly LOTB, but some other strong hits like said in there...took me a second to get the dramamine line for some reason, I think I read it as something else lol, but OMFG, that was solid too. Token, the pixar line was a solid flip of an old concept because of the UP reference, so I quoted it, but it was your weakest hit. The first 2 I quoted for you, were kinda bragging, but they were strong because of the circumstance and personal effect they had on your opponent. Outside of the quotes, it was pretty much the same, but I felt in the end that Token came a little bit more consistent. Count this or don't, but I voted last round, so cheers!

    v/Token

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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke


    vs.


    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next



    close match actually....I got Chrit by one, both of you came personal, both of you dropped pretty good shit, good job

    Vote - Bartender

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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    No doubt this faggot is frazzled, say goodbye to this truculent bastard
    We'll all catch Token on the flipside... of cheating occurring in battles
    okay.
    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    meh.
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    ha.
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    didn't like this.
    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    okay.
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    no.
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    meh.
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    coo.
    star told me she's sick of ur small dick, you aint ever workin the box kid
    and to her, a Token nitrate... shitty enough to fertilize crops with
    its not pronounced nite rate.. even if it was night rate sounds odd. its a lil forced imo.
    The way ur advancin is wrong, you cant hide ur mischevious plot
    cause the way token always conceals... his legacy as cheat n a fraud
    meh.
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke
    nice.
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging
    seen something reallly similiar to this recently I think.
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you
    weak closer.

    vs

    fuck what u did to cry, i'm droppin early so you'll reap misery
    ur the rightful title holder.... of making finals as the biggest bitch in league history
    mehish opener.
    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    aightt.
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    coo.
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    haha.
    faggot steals lines from his favorite battlers, so you know this dude'll be beat
    just watch Bartender mix with some Henny & make the world's first chewable drink
    nahh.
    bitch is stuck living in the past.. he's washed up, I feel bad for the poor guy
    cuz if it's 'come hell come high water'..... we'll find Chrit laying shoreside
    wasn't feeling this.
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    coo.
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    personal.
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    eh.
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    wasn't feelin this.
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    ha.
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz
    okay.
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting
    too simple of a closer.



    this was pretty solid for a season championship. both had some funny ass lines.. chrit I didnt' like how you dug up the beaten path concepts and tried to make an attempt n saying he flipped when EACH of those quotes were used differently. you had a solid verse.. I wasn't diggin the dramamine or nitrate wordplays ya tried. ya both had a weak opener n' closer. n' most your alls good shit was concentrated in the middle of your verses. slow to start..toke I didn't like your fedor, pixar or chewable drink lines.. I feel like toke had the harder verse though n' was a little more consistant. both had a good mix of personals. but I gotta say Toke edged this


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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    Damn it, I should be in this battle.. if life didn't spit in my face, the finals would prolly be Token Vs Punch (Round 4).. oh well, shit happens.. time for me to drop a vote.. I haven't even read the verses yet at all and have no clue who my vote'll be for, but if EITHER of you think this'll be a hate vote for WHATEVER reason, fuck you.. I don't hate anybody anymore.. why?? because I could hate somebody that dies tomorrow.. anyway, onto good old Chrit's verse..

    No doubt this faggot is frazzled, say goodbye to this truculent bastard
    We'll all catch Token on the flipside... of cheating occurring in battles
    This is what I like to call a forced personal.. decent concept but not hard consitering..
    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    Just like you've said to me Chrit.. this was just a wordplay thrown in there.. it does NOT make sense both ways so.. it's a decent wordplay, but since you and Phly both have a problem with wordplays not making sence both ways, I'ma just say this was 'ehh'.. I think everyone needs to take a step back, and rethink the definition of a wordplay and what is and isn't okay to do..
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    Decent personal.. coulda been executed alot better tho..
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    Again, same thing with the wordplay.. if you're gonna crit mine for the same reason, what do you really expect?? still, it was a decent wordplay..
    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    Voting ring shit is mad played.. even in Front Lines.. decent personal tho..
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    LOL, I liked this..
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    Flow's off, cool concept, but it was executed pretty bad imo..
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    Nah, not feelin' this one at all..
    star told me she's sick of ur small dick, you aint ever workin the box kid
    and to her, a Token nitrate... shitty enough to fertilize crops with
    Ehh, no..
    The way ur advancin is wrong, you cant hide ur mischevious plot
    cause the way token always conceals... his legacy as cheat n a fraud
    Another bad one..
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke
    Ok, he can never bring fire?? ok, not a very hard diss, too simple.. and plotting to ban smoke?? not a diss at all.. to me, this WAS a concept, but it's a reach for a concept given the fact that there's hardly a diss..
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging
    This was like your 3rd or 4th wordplay that doesn't make sense both ways.. I say you need to take your own advice that you've thrown my way and use it..
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you
    LOL, this was cool.. nice personal..

    So here's the bars I liked and would quote if I were doing my usual lazy vote..


    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you
    Other than those, you had a couple decent hits and alot of misses.. also, the flow didn't help with some.. I definitly thought you were gonna come harder than that..

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    fuck what u did to cry, i'm droppin early so you'll reap misery
    ur the rightful title holder.... of making finals as the biggest bitch in league history
    Ehh, too simple for me..
    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    Okay personal.. but like the 1st bar, it was too simple..
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    Decent, but you might be stretching this a little.. cuz if my memory serves me right, I beat you for the title around when Chrit signed out.. meh, either way, decent personal.. he DID sign out instead of facing you..
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    Creative, I liked this.. coulda used a better setup tho tbh.. still tho, real nice concept..
    faggot steals lines from his favorite battlers, so you know this dude'll be beat
    just watch Bartender mix with some Henny & make the world's first chewable drink
    Nah man.. good, TRUE personal, bad concept.. so no..
    bitch is stuck living in the past.. he's washed up, I feel bad for the poor guy
    cuz if it's 'come hell come high water'..... we'll find Chrit laying shoreside
    Ehh, nah..
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    Down under shit is played..
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    LMFAO, sick.. best shit of the battle so far..
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    Nah, cool wordplay, used wrong..
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    LOL, decent.. not a hard diss, but it also had a personal in there too so..
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    LMAO, nice..
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz
    Ehh, nah, not feelin'..
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting
    Didn't really connect too well for me.. Chrit definitly had a better finishing bar imo..

    Again, if I were doing a lazy vote, these are the lines I'd be quoting..


    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    That "monster on the beat" bar was the bar of the battle for sure.. I really liked that.. so all in all, you had one more quotable than Chrit.. also, some of your misses weren't as bad.. a couple were just too simple, instead of being forced or done wrong.. you DID have a couple bad ones there BUT.. overall you had one more stand out bar, and like I said, some misses weren't as bad as some of Chrit's..

    SOOOO..........

    \\//ote: Token

    Honestly tho, I was expecting the champ match to be ALOT better....




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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you



    vs.



    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    faggot steals lines from his favorite battlers, so you know this dude'll be beat
    just watch Bartender mix with some Henny & make the world's first chewable drink
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie





    Tied on quotables so i gotta break it down with the best and worst punches.

    top punch:
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    Killed it


    worst punch:
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    complete fail.. it isn't pronounced (fed-or) in any accents.


    gotta vote on consistency.

    vote chrit.

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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    No doubt this faggot is frazzled, say goodbye to this truculent bastard
    We'll all catch Token on the flipside... of cheating occurring in battles
    lol ok
    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    ok
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    lmao. nice
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    cool wp
    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    eh
    Always cooking up a scheme, and for that ur getting wrecked dawg
    since anyone that sees u bruno... its a worse sight than eminem saw
    nah
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    ok
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    ok idea. wasnt feelin the wording tho
    star told me she's sick of ur small dick, you aint ever workin the box kid
    and to her, a Token nitrate... shitty enough to fertilize crops with
    ehh. felt forced to me
    The way ur advancin is wrong, you cant hide ur mischevious plot
    cause the way token always conceals... his legacy as cheat n a fraud
    nah
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke
    nice. connected well. good personal
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging
    seen the windsor know idea before. the flip was eh & i dont see how this line rhymes
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you
    ehh. the banner connection didnt work for me.





    fuck what u did to cry, i'm droppin early so you'll reap misery
    ur the rightful title holder.... of making finals as the biggest bitch in league history
    eh. didnt like the wording
    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    cool direct jab. but the setup was eh
    & that's a sore subject, cuz you won the contenders by a scrape, see..
    it would've been my 7th .. but you signed out so you didn't have to face me
    ehh
    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    lol
    faggot steals lines from his favorite battlers, so you know this dude'll be beat
    just watch Bartender mix with some Henny & make the world's first chewable drink
    eh
    bitch is stuck living in the past.. he's washed up, I feel bad for the poor guy
    cuz if it's 'come hell come high water'..... we'll find Chrit laying shoreside
    ok
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    solid
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    lmao
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    cool wp. decent wording
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    eh
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    ok
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz
    ehh
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting
    lmao. cool


    No doubt this faggot is frazzled, say goodbye to this truculent bastard
    We'll all catch Token on the flipside... of cheating occurring in battles
    We know you'll be needing the week, so dont speak like ur champin the league
    since anyone thats seen you keynoted it's the worst performance they've seen
    Im owning this feminine farce, manly'll never describe Token at all
    you write like a bitch f'real, n' not just cause you be ghostin for star
    We've seen our ups and downs, but during beef this faggot is nothin
    since with Token dramamine... a verse that still makes us sick to our stomach
    That much ambition is bad yo, this bloke's persona's a sad joke
    since Toke can never bring fire when always plotting to ban smoke

    vs

    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    ain't ever dropped your own verse, bitch please just stop writing
    bitch you aint beneficial to the league... even before you were caught biting


    good battle. all in all both had their high points, and low points (even the lows were decent). i gotta base it on who had more standout lines imo, and that goes to bar by one more couplet.


    v/chrit
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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    And ur girl is hungry to fuck, she came to me needin some love
    n ended up sandwiched between me n the bed with my seed all over her buns
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    It'd be ironic to end in a tie... but Ill still make sure something bad happens
    cause It wont matter if he windsor knot... Ill still be leaving this fag hanging


    vs



    listen punk, there's no dodging the punches you've been dwelling chump
    we know you'll be all ears against me...... at the rate i've got em' swelling up
    & ya chicks got good head game, i love when her mouth's on it gliding softly
    shit, i'll make your girl go down under for so long she'll come back as an Aussie
    you claim to be a beast in audio, but everyone knows this dick's fake
    cuz if ur such a monster on the beat, then why'd you go lochness status on the mixtape?
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie


    Umm this wasnt the best champ match ever, chrit came decent he had a few wordplay lines that were blah wheras token went a bit too personal and played on the biting front.
    out of the quoteables i think it was a tie between chrits bun seed and tokens aussie line for bar of the battle...umm this is close as hell honestly, maybe token had a few better hits but came more played so im voting chrit for that reason only.

    V/CHRIT
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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    You may see a romantic scene, but ur girl and you are hopeless geeks
    in fact, you'll prolly be the first nerd to propose with a voting ring
    We know your abode is a mess dude, that box is in need of some rescue
    cause token's living quarters... mean he survives off the dollar menu
    Ur intentions for modding are see through, the decisions ur making are weak dude
    no wonder you had a banner season... and tried deleting the people that beat you

    vs

    inched ur way through bitch moves n' no shows so you'll be a light kin
    fuckin 8 wins n' no title... while I defended it 6 times by my 9th win
    striving to be an MMA fighter? fuck that... to fighting ur a newbie
    & ya Pixar proof your career going 'Up' is about as realistic as the movie
    fat fuck aint handsome, but you not bein the next MMA champ is bland son
    this man'll definitely be the next Fedor.... he'll lose his cool & throw a tantrum
    ur showin up shy & timid.. tilt ya chin up bitch i'm already flexed
    & if he shows some true grit in his teeth, then we know he'll be biting kenny next
    i've beaten vets up & poppin.. to bitches with cheap tactics so now i'll stop his
    cuz Chrit winning would cause such a protest, Phlymo would drop a pop quiz

    This was a good battle with a lot of hits and a few misses, Token had the Down under line that I felt was played and the Henny line that I didn't like But the rest of his verse was pretty consistant with good wording. Chrits dollar menu line wasn't THAT good but I liked the concept so I quoted it, wasn't really feeling how Chrit was flipping a lot of his quotes and most of his personals didn't really hold true. he also started out by putting a played Beaten path quote and saying that Token flipped it from them.. It was really just an empty attempt.. I didn't like the wording in most of his punche and the Buns line was ok, but felt a bit too childish and played. His voting ring tight was a really good spin off of the wordplay and had me rofl for a bit. Well, other then that, yes it was a good battle but Token gets my vote based on consistancy here and more quotable lines.

    V/Token.
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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    due to recent bullshit being brought to light, Punch & Nick's votes are DQed

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    Re: Season 10 Championship: Token vs. Bartender

    Bitch move.. I spent almost an hour dropping an honest vote on this..

    Fuck you Smoka....

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