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    perspective of a rapists

    ok basically the perspective i was going for was a rapist trying to show the world that it isn't wrong to rape. it was a topic given to me by a close friend of mine..
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    i move forward eyes despise the web of lies iv spun
    brandished by the sun her hazel eyes have been out shun
    i belted her to a bleeding mess then smirked at the pain i caused
    i could of paused... but i know only god can judge me by my flaws
    blood soaked paws i begin to choke with she's squirming from my might
    out of fright she may forget me... and never re live this night
    what a sight for a mother to behold, her eyes swell up with tears
    confirmation from the blood stained jacket instates her worst of fears
    it's be years since my re carnation and till this day i try to invoke
    but not provoke the fact that rape to me is just a joke
    kind hearted folk disgust this "piece of piss" they spit on me
    but i hope they see the light shine to show a brighter side of me
    to the world a bleak enigma falls on me im outcasted and disregarded
    sorry im not retarded im fully aware of what i do im just black hearted
    i wish the torture never started but i was destroyed at a young age
    beat with rage and riddled with laughter at every turn of the page
    they mocked me, beat me and ridiculed the clothes i wore
    so i swore when i got older id get my revenge on that whore
    Last edited by luke illestry; October 14th, 2009 at 07:40 AM Reason: cause i fucking can so get over it

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    Last edited by luke illestry; October 14th, 2009 at 06:32 AM

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    Re: perspective of a rapists

    i belted her to a bleeding mess then smirked at the pain i caused
    i could of paused... but i know only god can judge me by my flaws

    they mocked me, beat me and ridiculed the clothes i wore
    so i swore when i got older id get my revenge on that whore

    ^my fave lines of it...

    i kno to niggaz who been here 4 a min...when dey hear a noob nigga critique em...dey prolly jus scoff and brush it off...lol...but i'ma say my piece anyway...lol...

    i liked it...and i liked da concept...but i felt as far as like justify~n u prolly coulda hit dat edge alil harder...kno what i mean...like...sex isn't bad...kids come from sex...u coulda gave dat angle...or u was teach~n da girl da rough side of life...like a "better me...den a murderer" kinda deal...hope u learned ur lesson sister...lol...again i liked it...jus felt far as justification goes u coulda won me over alil more by upselling...lol...if any of my mess makes sense...lmao


    keep it up brotha...u got talent...but dats obvious if u battling cry


    ghosttt

    o yea...and gracias 4 da warning...would deff appreciate some feed back on da piece if it ain't 2 much trouble

    ( he ^ he )

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    Re: perspective of a rapists

    thankx, and sure lil homie

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    Re: perspective of a rapists

    upppppppppp

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    Re: perspective of a rapists

    read the first 4 lines man,and i bet the whole piece is as good as them,but i aint feelin this subject when i got to the tear lines,for personal reasons. i know you got talent though

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    Re: perspective of a rapists

    thnkx forthe feed man, it's cool

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