whateva

[Gizmo Duck]

My Scriptures are Pictures of Corridors Filled with Slaughter/
My Descriptions are Burning Depictions of Horror/
Sick Visions of Killings Cause Lyrical Technicians to Shiver and Cower/
My Wisdom and Power Have Entwined in Fusion/
Contusions and Bruises For any Intrusion/
Dreams and Illusions get Invaded by Raiders/
your Hits are Evaded by a Force Stronger than Vaders/
My Verse is Ingraved in your Brain,Your Thoughts Get Inslaved/
You Cry out in Pain,your Whole Frame is Melted in a River of Flames/
your Skull gets Incased on a Shelf near my Drapes/

[Gizmo Duck]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7443549
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7443563

heres the links..like it matters, ya'll wack niggaz won't give me no feed.

[Gizmo Duck]

my god

[Tim]

2. All pieces must be at least 16 lines!!

[Soule]

wack? I can name 15 people who'd destroy this verse.

[Bruklor]

"Incased on a shelf"???

****encased, by the way.

[Gizmo Duck]

>.>;

[Damz]

You have a lot to improve on, Don't let people drop you.
Put your head up, And keep dropping. Actually read what your writing man