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Thread: Need Help

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    Need Help

    My raps are causing parents to have a massive mindblowing reaction
    All the dicks who can't handle me JUST FUCK OFF
    I will react to your reaction or your action
    JUST FUCK OFF AND HELP YOUR SON JACK OFF
    Do i care If I'm white
    I could diss you for being black
    I will be seen tonight
    Just fuck off and just shove ya dick into your dad's crack
    I know I'm a shit rapper i rap like a retarded child
    Its the rhymes and lyrics what matters
    Its these parents getting me riled
    Keep on writing them letters
    Come on bounce to the motherfucking beat
    I'm from the SR3 1ER
    Come on ladies come into my bedroom suite
    Lets get into my sports car and drive real far
    Fast? You are not fast I'm rapping faster than the price of gas
    Fast? You are not fast I'm rapping faster than the price of gas
    Hey could you pass the hash
    Now I'm social outcast
    Its all over hey wait minute if the ICP can sell song thats means a deaf person can
    ICP are just a sad adults dressing up as clowns
    Its not my fault my van is ran by a man called Stan
    MC Ghosty here.
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    You've Earned a Custom Title! iLLin L's Avatar
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    Re: Need Help

    You're flow and rhyme scheme is kind of all over the place. And never diss yourself on your own track, it don't look good. Some stuff didn't rhyme, you definitely need to sit down and develop a rhyme scheme and then start writing.

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    Re: Need Help

    Thanks
    MC Ghosty here.
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    Re: Need Help

    This was bad. Really. Don't rap about sticking your privates into your fathers bung hole.
    Trapped within the lights of the city..
    Where it looks full of life but inside it's all empty..
    And from outside it's all tempting..
    What..it's all lies upon entry..

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