Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Friday at 11:59p.m. EST
Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Friday at 11:59p.m. EST
RB OG Triple OG
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king's a pussy, a product of his envioroment striking out with women
cuz no bitch'll Mary Kay...when he sells THAT for a livin'
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You should stop writing ya own shit cuz u've tried forever n ya still so bad
You'll always spit out softness...unless you bite something besides a pillow, fag
Last edited by King; July 27th, 2011 at 11:12 AM
The beginning and end of King's bar was dope as fuck..unfortunately the internal structure was really awkward and did a considerable job in bringing down the quality of the bar. N ya still so bad was abrupt and fucked up how smooth the line was up until that point..then you'll always spit out of softness to set up the concept was just really confusing and worded less than appealing, imo. Two components that really fucked up a great concept that had the potential to haymaker.
I think fb had a solid bar, my only complaint is the opener..it was longer than the second line without the second line building off the setup or elaborating on it..the closer just seemed to be the stinger, that's it. If he would have trimmed down on the wordiness of the first line, minimized the subtle hints, then expounded on the concept more in the first half of the second line, then afterwards hit with the stinger to deliver the concept..it would have been much more impactful.
I would say King's mistakes in wording outweighed fb's mistake in placement.
v-fb
GO FOR BROKE
nvm
Last edited by King; July 27th, 2011 at 11:16 AM
I gotta agree kings concept for his finisher fucked up the setup of his punch wording also messed up the execution. FB had a more wittier concept and finished his well.
V/FB
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I have to agree, the opening of Kings punch started solid but landed softly. Feed Back, I feel you were the complete opposite... The way you started, I was initially put off by it... but actually found myself laughing at the end product.
vote - ~feed-back~
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good battle.. prob the best I've seen from FB, King was good too.. but I think FB was cleverer here, close one..
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good battle...fb got a nice hit with his punch. king wasnt too bad but i kinda liked fb's concept more
v/ ~feedback~
yeah...feedback had the better punch here...king's punch was just soft to me, while feed back came with a good hit
vote - feed back
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ehh battle. I thought both battlers bars were worded wrong, kings setup was nice, but didn't deliver it well. feedback had better execution in his punch
v - fb
feed back wins
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