I really liked the concept and how you delievered it here man, just at times I would have liked to see better word phrases/choices, like at the end I thought you could have ended it deeper then "is my new chilling spot".. but at the same time, you had that kind of feel through out with the "im not cool anymore", it was just different as at times it was really deep, then at other times simplistic like that, which actually fit even better in a way, as the theme/concept here was a toy talkin to a child, so you delivered good emotion when needed, but brought it back to a more simplistic route to keep the concept "real" persay, so overall I enjoyed the read for sure, could have used a pinch more imagery, but the emotion made up for it..