Alias Minded
Child-raising Badass
HAYMAKER TOURNAMENT
10-16 lines (agree on line limit in check-in)
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Check-in due by Wednesday Midnight EST
Verses due by Friday Midnight EST
Winner Moves on to Next Round
Wins/Losses will be added on Record
Points will count for FL Ranks
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@Alias Minded
@ChilD -raising badass
Round 2
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When I murder u in battles its cause your not the type to improvise
this bum only drops good frees wen he sleeps outside at winter time
My lines will choke this scrub'n'stop ya head u vegatable thats binded
cuz I'd rather blow my own brains out before my alias went mind dead
my drops will fuck u up so bad that you'll start to inquire bout STDs
If i'm a biter its on your neck because i'm the illest vampire overseas
I'll own this dork'n'have his blood to feed<-shots to his face in kind
Then punch through his bars so hard u'd think i've drunk outta my Mind
my flow crushes u with with speed I'll slow it down cuz u dont get it
I'll take my time 'n' flip AM...
...into pm then send him one so that he can finally get the message
Last edited by KnowP; December 17th, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Originally Posted by Child-Raising Badass
Phony.. You didn't win before.. N' Now you know its a loss
Only time a 'Child' walking outta here a winner is with his 'Champion' 'socks'
This like christmas, you fucking in my hood… Hang ya like an ornament
At least this time I know you'll 'Drop' good… right outta the fuckin tournament
Back to quotes... on a personal level I wanna get this back to rolling
N' Your still losing battles... so when the fuck you going back to trolling
RB's infested with treason… site's dying out welcome to RB
Not getting respect for a reason… Noone gives a fuck too 'C'RB
Transferred from Rap Verse, you fucked up.. see this RB where we come the hardest
Bright side is humans learn from their mistakes.. so now at least your Retarted
When I murder u in battles its cause your not the type to improvise
this bum only drops good frees wen he sleeps outside at winter time
My lines will choke this scrub'n'stop ya head u vegatable thats binded
cuz I'd rather blow my own brains out before my alias went mind dead
ehhh light work...potential bars
vs
This like christmas, you fucking in my hood… Hang ya like an ornament
At least this time I know you'll 'Drop' good… right outta the fuckin tournament
Back to quotes... on a personal level I wanna get this back to rolling
N' Your still losing battles... so when the fuck you going back to trolling
closer battle than the last one. CRB you getting better soon. leave that trollin shit alone. its bad for ya health lol. u woulda got this had you worded the last two bars better. they were tight but fell off at the end. your second line has to come together hard based off your set up bar. keep at it son. AM, the opener woulda been nice if you had flipped that second line around. good verse tho man.
v. Alias
When I murder u in battles its cause your not the type to improvise
this bum only drops good frees wen he sleeps outside at winter time
Decent1.5 | 2
My lines will choke this scrub'n'stop ya head u vegatable thats binded
cuz I'd rather blow my own brains out before my alias went mind dead
Feeling the first line not the second.1 | 2
my drops will fuck u up so bad that you'll start to inquire bout STDs
If i'm a biter its on your neck because i'm the illest vampire overseas
nah0.5 | 2
I'll own this dork'n'have his blood to feed<-shots to his face in kind
Then punch through his bars so hard u'd think i've drunk outta my Mind
meh0.5 | 2
my flow crushes u with with speed I'll slow it down cuz u dont get it
I'll take my time 'n' flip AM...
...into pm then send him one so that he can finally get the message
Ok this isn't bad coulda been worded better but I like the concept and wordplay.1 | 2
Badass I give you a 4.5/10
Phony.. You didn't win before.. N' Now you know its a loss
Only time a 'Child' walking outta here a winner is with his 'Champion' 'socks'
Decent, the name play was weak though1 | 2
This like christmas, you fucking in my hood… Hang ya like an ornament
At least this time I know you'll 'Drop' good… right outta the fuckin tournament
Feeling this one, opener was a little weak but overall good1 | 2
Back to quotes... on a personal level I wanna get this back to rolling
N' Your still losing battles... so when the fuck you going back to trolling
haha nice personal1.5 | 2
RB's infested with treason… site's dying out welcome to RB
Not getting respect for a reason… Noone gives a fuck too 'C'RB
Ok decent1 | 2
Transferred from Rap Verse, you fucked up.. see this RB where we come the hardest
Bright side is humans learn from their mistakes.. so now at least your Retarted
decent punch man1.5 | 2
Alias I give you a 6/10
Alias took this with consistency and harder hitting punches. CRB you're definitely elevating man keep at it homie.
When I murder u in battles its cause your not the type to improvise
this bum only drops good frees wen he sleeps outside at winter time
^ok
my drops will fuck u up so bad that you'll start to inquire bout STDs
If i'm a biter its on your neck because i'm the illest vampire overseas
^this seemed like some fag shit to me..wasnt feeling it
..rest of ur verse was ass.. no hate but the sting factor wasnt there
vs
Back to quotes... on a personal level I wanna get this back to rolling
N' Your still losing battles... so when the fuck you going back to trolling
RB's infested with treason… site's dying out welcome to RB
Not getting respect for a reason… Noone gives a fuck too 'C'RB
Transferred from Rap Verse, you fucked up.. see this RB where we come the hardest
Bright side is humans learn from their mistakes.. so now at least your Retarted
^mild bars
v/AM slightly better verse. both were mild n didnt supply heat. no hate just step it up fellas
AM moves on
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