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Thread: New To Forum

  1. #1

    New To Forum

    Whack rappers stay pushing bricks,
    I stay pushing tapes
    With every pussy hit, is what you pussies get,
    I’m everything you pussies aint
    I’m a dick, but still ahead of you pricks,
    and thats just the tip of the ice
    I’m wonder bread, yet you hunger for bread,
    and aint gettin’ a slice
    This aint a death threat, but you guessed correct,
    its a promise, I’m in it for life
    All you rap gods, are just rap frauds,
    but ya’ll about to witness christ
    I don’t need to spit to beats, to split seas,
    I just walk on water
    If you can’t read between the lines,
    well, I’m what audible offers
    You Juggalo’s could get it too,
    but its obvious I’m smarter
    You aint half as nice, to grab a mic,
    so you grab washable markers
    I’m coming for blood, whether you family or friend,
    have a grammy or ten
    This tin man, is in hand, to get brain,
    so hand me your head
    I will eat you out of house and home,
    then take you out ya throne
    I aint watching’ shit, I’m too raw, to know what a condom is,
    and now you know
    I don’t call rappers “actors”, cuz they actors,
    its the way they act
    Ya’ll better just fucking face the fact,
    that Play is back!

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    Re: New To Forum

    Hell yea. I can see your skills, bro. Your gonna do great here, just keep dropping, keep hustlin and making your rhymes better. Look forward to seeing you in the battle league, whenever your ready.

    I'll be tracking your progress and looking out for you.

  3. #3

    Re: New To Forum

    This was a written exercise for me, I've been on a year long hiatus from music, and I came across this site about an hour ago, decided to register and jot this verse down quick. Appreciate the feedback!

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    No prob, dog.

    We got a battle league, a poetry section, an audio section, we got alotof stuff you can get involved in.

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    Re: New To Forum

    @ItsPwizz


    two links of good feedback or this will be closed.

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    Re: New To Forum

    This is pretty good, loses flow on some parts but rap isn't only judged by flow.
    If it had countinuos flow it would be epic however. Good job kiu.
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