Aids Victims in St. Louis

[Child-Raising Badass]

Why you dying? you just don't give a fuck with Aids
No one gives a fuck u just don't care cuz we hate u
u vampire niggas with aids rapin victims everyday
infectin everyday aids aids aids your the virus lining up
for some injections..erections sections shot dead so u dont rise
we kill u shot guns to lobe and split all directions
AIDS: you can't gain weight & u throw up alot the ass
to the porcelain your best friend fortune.............
The point of the story here the city should be nuked up
erraditicated killed bombed stabbed burnned before they
raise and inflict everybody......AIDS AIDS AIDS gets ya down
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Now for the Good said...better yet the s*&T side

The living..the dying u your baby is crying
its like you haven't all the crying the drama
Now Care from Obama? In all ya we'd call ya recall ya
flaked out make no mistake clout we spray of rain on ya
we get the babes on u Fuck u..
..YES

[James L]

This seems like a senseless, gross, ill-articulated spew of hatred for either aids or those who host it. Either way you should be ashamed to even call this a piece of literature. Even if you didn't intend to offend or insult anyone, just your misuse of the english language is enough to call these random words you threw together, a piece of shit... I know i'm supposed to provide constructive criticism, but fuck that, this is garbage, and took very little thought.

[Fresh]

wtf is this.. i used to be sort of amused by some of ur abstract shit but this is filth dude.

[Nahlidge]

@Child-Raising Badass;

2 links and I'll re-open this. You don't have 2 links for your last drop either. I'm gonna just start closing your threads as soon as I see them if you're gonna keep posting pieces without leaving feed on others.