When ya Young

**Endeva.** · November 21st, 2014, 03:59 PM

just finished this today...

heres my links
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...le-(Freeverse)
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...u-Got-A-Friend

***ILLunatic*** · November 21st, 2014, 04:00 PM

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**Endeva.** · November 23rd, 2014, 02:06 PM

lets get some feedback in here peeps...

**Oxymoron** · November 23rd, 2014, 06:35 PM

ok your vocals are semi low or something. something is odd sounding. the writtens are solid. But your flow could be a little more polished in some bits. The flow gets better as it goes on. hook works for me. It almost sounds like youre holding back something. So yeah the writtens were mostly polished. Just need to work on delivery and i think it will make your writtens sound better.

**Endeva.** · November 24th, 2014, 11:25 AM

yea I agree, that's where my focus lies at the minute, the delivery

...thanks for hitting bro

**Chenadu Blacc** · November 26th, 2014, 10:37 AM

nah I aint feeling that voice at all..mix was horrible.. some people just aint meant to do this shit. don't like that beat not one bit. this was just a disaster from the jump to be honest. you forcing rhymes.

**Brian Pumper** · December 1st, 2014, 11:47 PM

Beat is nice. I like whatever language you're rapping in. Sounds hard. Bosnian? Vocals are not mixed with the beat well at all... they're not well mixed period lol. But I like your delivery bro. IDK why I really like whatever language you're rapping in. Sounds dope. Keep at it G.

**Pair-A-Dyce** · December 4th, 2014, 07:15 PM

LMAO @ Pumper saying this was Bosnian.
@DEV aka Endeva yeah the vocals are definitely being drown out by the beat. My honest suggestion to you if you really want to get better would be to stop rapping on your own beats, save up some money and get a better mic. When you rap on someone else's production it will force you to approach each track differently. Also I think if you hear yourself on better quality, it will help you in the technical areas that you sound like you're lacking.

**Endeva.** · December 5th, 2014, 07:26 AM

Originally Posted by Pair-A-Dyce

LMAO @ Pumper saying this was Bosnian.
@DEV aka Endeva yeah the vocals are definitely being drown out by the beat. My honest suggestion to you if you really want to get better would be to stop rapping on your own beats, save up some money and get a better mic. When you rap on someone else's production it will force you to approach each track differently. Also I think if you hear yourself on better quality, it will help you in the technical areas that you sound like you're lacking.

i'll take that on board bro, makes sense