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@Wuxia
@Echelon
Check. I plan on writing 1 bar every 3 days so I can make a fair assessment of its quality before adding it to my verse, if you don't mind, perhaps you can do the same.
Echelon/Sinacog
women think ur boring & dumb.
every chick near cyndi sighed...
...to lauper head off cuz girls just want to have fun.
kill spree fucking bodied me & i was abysmal versus bash
thought i was on a whole different echelon but ur still just worthless trash
ur a mama's boy for real tho, she taught u what sex is like
she a fairly odd parent who drink a cosmo and wanda into ur bed at night
ur girl hates ur limp dick & the rug burn from sex in ur loft
elevator game rules. she hits the floor rides up & down but never gets off.
them boys don't fuck around, we traffick in ALL the states
ech loses heart or kidneys buckle when dude see how my goons operate.
I'm coming off the top of the dome! Popping the chrome!
You're a ''NERVOUS TIC''.. I'm a PARA--SITE CONQUERING ROME!
KNOCKING UR BONES! Molotov tomahawk conquers ur dome!
WUXIA!?? BITCH PLEASE! I just gave ''TOMMY THE CHROME''!!
I'm SINACOG not ECHELON SOMEONE CHANGE MY NAME!
RE-RANGE UR FRAME! cowboys and indians! this indians range is aimed(I'm HEBREW)!
I'm knocking ur top off! MOLOTOX LEG OFF!
TAXING LEAGUES! NO WAY UR TAXING ME!
@Echelon good to see you’re still alive homie lol
Nervous tic/conquering Rome. It could have been a cool concept but all the quotations and — u can get rid of man. This isn’t long bar form or Facebook battling. Ya don’t need to add all of that. Tommy the chrome was a miss bro, lmfaoooo I’m gonna give u the cowboys and Indians line. But not because it was good, it’s because u added (IM HEBREW) At the end lmao wtf. Last line wasn’t even a punch.
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Wuxia what up homie
Opener was ok. Worthless trash same thing. 2 light jabs. Lmfao @ the fairly odd parents bar, wtf. Wasn’t that good but made me laugh. I’ll consider that a jab as well. Lol elevator was fire. Closer was meh
Ech, I feel like you have the potential to be a good writer but you need to reconstruct your concepts and wording to fit the short bar form. Def a decent showing out of you considering what I’ve read from you in the past. Keep at it g. @Wuxia def came light in this but rightfully so. He understood who he was going up against and planned accordingly with some light jabs and good humor.
v/ wuxia
I'm coming off the top of the dome! Popping the chrome!
You're a ''NERVOUS TIC''.. I'm a PARA--SITE CONQUERING ROME!
great concept, smooth wording, structure could be better
KNOCKING UR BONES! Molotov tomahawk conquers ur dome!
WUXIA!?? BITCH PLEASE! I just gave ''TOMMY THE CHROME''!!
super savage
I'm SINACOG not ECHELON SOMEONE CHANGE MY NAME!
RE-RANGE UR FRAME! cowboys and indians! this indians range is aimed(I'm HEBREW)!
do you want me to change your name? Sinacog? The Hebrew Sinacog? סינקוג?
I'm knocking ur top off! MOLOTOX LEG OFF!
TAXING LEAGUES! NO WAY UR TAXING ME!
weak finish man.
AJ, this was fire and you're definitely one of the better writers in this league. Only thing I'd suggest is less capital letters and more purple dragon bars. I got you at 3/4.
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women think ur boring & dumb.
every chick near cyndi sighed...
...to lauper head off cuz girls just want to have fun.
hehehe
kill spree fucking bodied me & i was abysmal versus bash
thought i was on a whole different echelon but ur still just worthless trash
solid
ur a mama's boy for real tho, she taught u what sex is like
she a fairly odd parent who drink a cosmo and wanda into ur bed at night
haha
ur girl hates ur limp dick & the rug burn from sex in ur loft
elevator game rules. she hits the floor rides up & down but never gets off.
cool
them boys don't fuck around, we traffick in ALL the states
ech loses heart or kidneys buckle when dude see how my goons operate.
clever wordplay
Wuxia wtf did you do better against Echelon than you did in the finals against kill spree haha. Wtf? Lots of cool wordplay and concepts here. Basically just rained down on him. I got you at 5/5.
Overall this is probably battle of the week. Both came with the fire. I gotta give it to Wu though for more creativity.
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
The random “I’m HEBREW!” absolutely annihilated me for real.
Vote - Wuxia
WORD P e r f e c t !
RESERVOIR GODS
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kill spree fucking bodied me & i was abysmal versus bash
thought i was on a whole different echelon but ur still just worthless trash
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Idk what I just read lol
I thought wux verse was ok , the fairly odd parent line made me laugh but it was a reach and ya know it ! But echelon was just all over the place I read his verse , .. elevator line was ok , kidneys buckle was cool too.
Wuxia pretty easily
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Ech had some flow.. if this was audio he would do a little better
Prob is.. that’s all he had. No real direct punches nothing hard hittin or even moldy hitting
Typical ech verse.. guy as been in like 300battles I’m a little dumbfounded he hasn’t slightly got the hang of it lol
Wux was cool.. I mean anything he would’ve dropped would’ve worked against ech..Wanda and buckle bars were my fav. Cool verse
VOTE:wuxia
WTF. v/Wux
I'm not even going to bother breaking down that 1998 AIM battle verse from Echelon
6-0 wuxia
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
6-0 Wuxia wins
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