Saviorself Vs Miracle (MIR WINS)

[miracle]

house rules
5 bars (10 lines)
Due Sunday midnight (most likely I’ll post before)
3-0 = KO, first to 4 votes wins

[miracle]

Check

[Saviorself]

.::Mic Check::.

[miracle]

Trashing this young buck ain’t even fun, shit got me at a standstill
And if I’m down in the dumps ill ditch ya body in a landfill
Head shots all day son… this 45 stays popping lids
When I load up I’m causing self harm like a bunch of emo kids
You’ll get scoped from blocks away.. bullets will leave every piece of u torn
When I line up SS in the sight of my arms like a nazi uniform
You aint a gangster like me..I’m the type to let a slug rip
Only time this pussy is holding up arms is dancing to a club hit
Fuck the gun I’ll get it done with other weapons.. send u to the dude above
With a switchblade I’ll put the stealing ya heart like finding true love

[Saviorself]

Apologize for dropping late SMH

.::Mic Check::.

I’m not expecting much from this FUCK, your pen STROKE Lacks In Performance/
Your so Fat & Enormous, you’ve developed a Fupa keeping your baby dick Flaccid & Dormant/
Mir’s never been gutter, far from living Life In The Projects/
Couldn’t compete in any sport unless it was a Pie Eating Contest/
Tuck in ya tail, take this Fuckin “L & walk away”, Greedy Stoner/
Your moms gonna Need A Donor, to replace her twat after this Meaty Boner/
Just stop speaking poser, the only redneck I’ve seen not Handy W/ Tools/
You not killing shit with those bars if you were a kid at Colombine selling Candy In Schools/
I’m demanding this fool forfeit, or find the body of “Miracle On 34TH ST”/
Quit the gun talk, your not ripping Slugs Man, just Mukbangs & clips of him Force-Feed/

[Lady Poet]

Even though gun lines getting old
both very creative
Savior Punchlines funny and entertaining
I felt like Mir ending more creative compare to Savior
vote-Mir

[Chree]

Mentioning someone's verse in their verse is wrong right?
Bad self savior. (don't worry I don't hate you.)
You either guessed right or you flipped a written which gets a stormy cloud from me.

Miracle

You aint a gangster like me..I’m the type to let a slug rip
Only time this pussy is holding up arms is dancing to a club hit

Solid

Head shots all day son… this 45 stays popping lids
When I load up I’m causing self harm like a bunch of emo kids

I do not like this bar from you. It seems like you dissed yourself. i know his name is self but it still sounds meh.

You’ll get scoped from blocks away.. bullets will leave every piece of u torn
When I line up SS in the sight of my arms like a nazi uniform

This had an okay tie in.


Saviorself

Mir’s never been gutter, far from living Life in the Projects/
Couldn’t compete in any sport unless it was a Pie Eating Contest/

This was okay but for some reason it feels like your best bar.


Just stop speaking poser, the only redneck I’ve seen not Handy W/ Tools/
You not killing shit with those bars if you were a kid at Colombine selling Candy In Schools/

This had a good idea too it but it was executed poorly.
The first line was stronger than the first

all in all, yes, the gun bars are repetitive, but they were solid punches at least with no ambiguity
Miracle gets my vote.
Self should work on his timing and tie ins to punches.

[daveDILLY]

mir takes this
nazi arms & steel in heart was good
sav was cool
need to come harder but shit was alright
saves open lines was funny
winner mir