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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@KnoXville. @miracle
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Let’s Do This.
you Dead brethren, One Bang from this Drum’ll leave his Head trembling,
I’m here to expose everything in Kashmir, while you day dream bout being broke listening to Led Zeppelin.
I’ll wreck this snitch bitch if he tries to tell. My knuckles r splitting shit
The only thing ya gonna eyewitness is a closed fist fucking hitting it
Idk aboht this battle, Kashmir would’ve been a nice flip but I’m not sure you went the right way about it and ended up being wordy and stingless where as mir came with a trademark basic flip but one of those “why have I never thought of this”. I think imma have to give this to mir coz it was more direct n that won it for him but took me a while to decide
V/mir
I've seen cashmere before but not kashmir with a led zeppelin flip. I thought it was decent
Eyewitness was kinda meh in my opinion. Seems like a lazy flip to me.
Underwhelming battle but I got Knox taking the dub
v/ knox
I liked the idea of a Kashmir wordplay but not at all keen on the execution of this one. “I’m here to expose everything in cash Mir” doesn’t sound natural and I’m not convinced it really makes sense as a sentence. Neither does “here to expose everything in Kashmir”. Seemed like an attempt at a double entendre but the sentence doesn’t work either way, let alone both. Also why would anyone daydream about being broke?
I thought Mir’s was fine, albeit kind of perfunctory. It did the job though, enough for the win IMO.
Vote- Mir
yea ... i gotta o with Fresh here.. both were iight but knox edges out.. fresher wordplayOriginally Posted by Fresh
-knox
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
i guess everybody right
this battle aint that strong
seen better from both
i like knox flow&rhyming just aint think it ended that strong
mir had a coo solid hit
it wasnt the best idea but it worked
winner miracle
wasnt too keen on either wordplay but miracle had a harder hitting and more natural sounding punch
i will say that knox was a bit more creative and direct
felt like the punch was juggling too many concepts to land directly tho
vote - miracle
v/Miracle
Knox had a dope np/wp, but slacked off on attacking his opponent afterward. especially with using such a unique nameplay i would have double down with the ending since there are few unexpected np for miracle. miracle had a night lil jab all pun intended. it was a littler more direct but it landed. once again pun intended
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mir wins
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