WK36: Bare ryu(0-0) vs MV(20-17) (RYU WINS)

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)



You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @mv

[bare ryu]

check

[MV]

no flinches, when you see the Loiusville coming to knock off ya cheap lash extension
please bare witness, normally I wouldn't bat an eye so I don't want your bitch ass to miss this

[bare ryu]

im new here so i peeped old battles just to figure the tiers out
immediately felt M pathetic and sensed the whole site felt that for years now

[Chree]

no flinches, when you see the Loiusville coming to knock off ya cheap lash extension
please bare witness, normally I wouldn't bat an eye so I don't want your bitch ass to miss this

MV you should really proofread before you post. (also a bad habit of mine)

This was very wordy MV. The Louisville slugger line was okay with the tie ins to womanism IE lashe.
The bat an eye word play was pretty good
all in all it was an okay line but the ending could of been better than just calling him a bitch.

im new here so i peeped old battles just to figure the tiers out
immediately felt M pathetic and sensed the whole site felt that for years now

The empathetic / M pathetic entendre was clear technical damage

Bare Ryu gets my vote for less filler and slightly better word play.
It might have even received better if unfuk didnt just use an emphasize one.

[Fresh]

MV, overall decent bar but I have to knock some points for not rhyming and also bat an eye is a played concept I've seen used before.

Ryu I have no complaints. Dope nameplay and good punch. Good stuff

v/ryu

[Unfukwitable]

Both lines were good here felt one just had a slightly more creative approach props to both here

V/ BARE RYE

[daveDILLY]

i liked both bars
bare was a smooth punch
glad 2 see new people joining
i think his was strong so he my vote
winner bare ryu

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BARE WINS