Regular Battle
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@miracle @Austin Flowers
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@miracle @Austin Flowers
Check
Yeerroo
A loose screw to chose a victim and lose… a screw is missing… and just when you thought miracle was the man you swiped left on his wifes “married but he don’t have the tool to fix it”//
Last edited by Austin Flowers; October 5th, 2024 at 02:43 AM
Punches will bust ya tulips. leaving u pushing up daisies this fall
One hit sending flowers to a early grave ya mom can set’em up at ur funeral
Vote Austin Flowers-
I really liked the multis throughout and it was clever. Just worded better than Miracles which he had a decent punch name flip concept but didn't execute.
you are rhyming "fall" with funeral and its not even close for a simple single syllable rhyme scheme.
Don’t like the way Austin used screw twice in the same line, the concept of the punch was okay but didn’t really connect that hard I liked miracles concept and was a good flip but felt it lacked a bit of sting but still enough to take the W
V/mir
solid punches from both
austin ur layout is a bit confusing and it made it harder to communicate ur punch
the setup for the punch kinda fell off with the wordiness
mir it was a simple flip and but u executed it fairly cleanly
mvgt - mir
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Originally Posted by bare ryu
^Agree with everything @bare ryu said here. Not much else to be added in fairness.
Vote for Miracle.
Flowers I feel like your bar was a bit convoluted. Which is a shame because your style of writing and wordplay is right up my alley, I think saying his marriage is broke or something else that involves a tool would have sealed this battle for you. miracle on the other game solid punch
V/miracle
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Mir wins 4-1
This is crazy bro didn’t even rhyme.
And u didn’t have a punch so…
he did have a punch- and it was wayyyy better written than yours. but this site is hilarious in that it votes the same 3 people lol
Yeah bro. You are trash asf no wonder you win every battle you’re in your little fan club travels along with you and don’t understand shit about rap. Wack ass just rhymed fall with funeral. At this point it’s a poetry site.
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Lemme guess though the 4 votes rhymed it like funerall ������
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