Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@MV @Virbius
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@MV @Virbius
Check
If he’s rushed his text I’ll be fucking vexed, see he’s inconsistent, more ups and downs than this tard’s moniker…
If he ain’t come correct catch a punctured chest from some sharp polymer so if it’s M V then a straightforward line that’s his heart monitor.
(M V then a straight forward line = electrocardiogram spikes and dips followed by a flatline)
are you excited to be a joke? my kingdom is fueled by the body's that I've smoked
everyone has a part to play in my Mpyre, and i can just see your Tender heart getting Stoked
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MV- I'm new here but I like your style. Very dark punchline- definitely fitting for halloween and whatever is going on with your avatar. I really dig that. I think this might be over some heads as simple as it is- empire/m's pyre, bodies for fuel- stoked again a lot of wordplay going on in that same umbrella.
Virbius- I also liked what you dropped outside of the end lines- the rhyming was weak- tards moniker/heart monitor, but i loved the inner rhyme and multis. I thought the sharp polymer would have been a dope punch scheme, but you mix in too many words.
I don't want to debate whether or not this is a 2 bar drop (see chat on that) so I'll vote without consideration of that.
I vote MV- I thought it was cleaner, Virb was a little too wordy, even unnecessarily so. I also really liked MV's wordplay within the dark realm that he took it. It's not a haymaker- it's more of a braggadocio type shit and I dug it.
both really fresh concepts, loved the way u guys developed the angles
i think the biggest separation came down to execution
gotta be nitpicky to decide but virb u lost a bit of steam because of the wordiness despite having a cool angle
MV its a bit of an indirect punch but ur slightly cleaner execution gets u my vote
vote - MV
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Hmm both had their merits but I was expecting g more fireworks - virb was a bit wodY for me where as MV even tho it was a flip off his own name was just more direct and tbf a better mv flip than any I’ve seen
V/mv
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