WK37: HMM(RD1) Jack hallows vs Bare Ryu (RYU WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)



You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@bare ryu @Jack Hallows

[Jack Hallows]

check. g/l bro

[bare ryu]

james baldwin

[bare ryu]

if u think this lame talks to bitches, its safe to say ur WAY optimistic
tried to imagine jackalope with fire birds but shit…even THAT game’s nonexistent

[Jack Hallows]

Lmao ey what you expect from some no show lines, Maya Angelou?

langston hughes

james baldwin

maya angelou, langston hughes, james baldwin. all revered for their myriad wisdom
comparing u isn’t ‘cuz ur rare & mythic, it’s cuz i’ll bare ryu with ‘em

[H Dot Verseman]

Jack Hallows- Your punch was a good bit more direct. I'll say this Jack- you need to clean up your set ups and transitions. - both lacked good flow, no multis, no inner rhyme.

Bare- you had much better flow and multis throughout- I just didnt like the stretch on the punchline. But it's close because everything else was way cleaner

I have to vote Jack Hallow- I just thought his punch was better

[Austin Flowers]

Ryu came with bare minimum to me wasn’t terrible just lacked a lot in every category compared to jack who came stronger more personal even though the last line was a little fuzzy it still connected. Wouldn’t say either came weak at all but I gotta go Jack

[miracle]

I’m going with bare ryu on this one. Wasn’t a huge fan of fire birds cuz that’s a gay way to say girls.. some British shit but all jack did was use the wordplay that bare ryu already gave when making a name.. bury u.. u didn’t do nothing that was outside the box u literally just said his name (mentioning the wordplay he already provided)

VOTE RYU

[Virbius]

Yeah Bare Ryu was great, multiple wordplay components and well put together. I agree with Miracle that Jack’s punch seemed to just be reiterating the pun which is already intended by Bare in their name.

Vote- Bare Ryu

[Slayerr.]

Yeah this is an easy W for ryu his punch was nice and structured well with good word play wasn’t a fan of jacks really just listed a bunch of names then a weak flip
V/ryu

[KnoXville.]

I’m going with bare ryu on this one. Wasn’t a huge fan of fire birds cuz that’s a gay way to say girls.. some British shit but all jack did was use the wordplay that bare ryu already gave when making a name.. bury u.. u didn’t do nothing that was outside the box u literally just said his name (mentioning the wordplay he already provided)

VOTE RYU

I thought I was the only one no hate but my vote goes to Ryu.

[MV]

Both punches were good here. I feel like Jack was a bit too direct. One more layer to that punch would have made it phenomenal. Bare Ryu’s concept was a bit simpler but the punch was funny and the multies filled out the bar and kept it from ring boring. However I didn’t like the fire birds part lol. That delivery with the Multies is on point tho

V/Bare Ryu

[ItsBav]

This was one of the better 1 bar battles I've seen so far. Both had nice ideas, bare ryu had better execution on his bar here.

Creative approaches from both though.

vote: bare ryu

[H Dot Verseman]

I vote Bare Ryu on the strength of his name alone......

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btw- those votes up above are hilarious

[miracle]

Bare ryu wins