WK38: HMM: (RD2) jack Hallows vs Davedilly (JH WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)



You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Jack Hallows @daveDILLY

[Jack Hallows]

sup champ.

[daveDILLY]

here
good luck

[daveDILLY]

yo dis hoe scared! ima psycho killer - so u dont want 2go there..
my flows rare -
& the glock will put jack in a box if i pop up outta nowhere

[Jack Hallows]

dD…

this pred’ is incessant. he’s not of a respectable essence
the feds should arrest ‘im.. cuz big D behind baby d is his Initial sexual preference
Howl

[Virbius]

Dave’s was solid but a bit predictable. Saw a Jack in the box line last week, although this one was well put together.

Jack was pretty great here, very creative. I like lines like that which take advantage of the format / only work as text.

Vote- Jack

[Bag Mandela]

Dave, written reasonably well and the punch obviously works but I've heard stacks of jack-in-the-box lines so it didn't have as much impact for me.
Jack, creative angle (by which I mean creating that angle from his initials, not simply the pedo thing) nice rhyming throughout & closed it out well. First time I've seen you battle & I rated it. Got the w convincingly.

Vote Jack Hallows

[bare ryu]

dave wording was fire but the angles too predictable to capitalize on it. was a creative take but a played concept can only take u so far

jack i like the execution on this a lot of initial wordplays are corny but this was solid. the reference to initial i think is what sold it for me

mvgt - jack

[MV]

baby d is sadistic work fam lmao. this shit made me laugh. Dave was cool here. i fuck with it but jack had the comedy factor locked in and won me over this round.

v/Jack

[miracle]

Jack wins