The Shaman vs. Jack Hallows (OPEN FOR VOTES)

[TheShaman]

16-20 lines. Just some sparring.


I'll wrap lassos round Jack Hallow's neck and snap it on the scaffold.
I Heard he lost the Depth, so now he'll be back like Jack Sparrow.
But he lost his head. Talking shit with the Headless Horseman.
It's just an act, yo. The bullets aren't real. Ask Alec Baldwin.

You're a sexual predator. Like Epstein, Diddy, Woody Allen, Jackson.
Must be Hallow's Eve, cuz there's fire in the hole Jack'll-­land-in.
You play a character. Marilyn Manson. Plus you suck on the radio.
This pedophile should have a rib removed to perform autofellatio.

I blast through on rocket ships. But this whack dude's monotonous.
This is 2001: A Space Oddyssey when Hal loses consciousness.
You're a phantom with no opera, bitch. A statue from Acropolis.
My rhymes are polished, like in the future by data archeologists.

You don't exist like I'm a solipsist. You're sleepy, filled with hollow tips.
Your world is meaningless so you create havoc: Dostoyevsky's Nihilists.
I just keep my distance and enjoy watching shit burn like arsonists.
That's why I'm going light on you, Jack.. You asked for this.


Waiting on Jack's verse.

[Jack Hallows]

i love it.

checking in. kinda busy but i’ll drop soon. probably tomorrow. best verse i’ve seen from you so far so i’m amped.

[Jack Hallows]

bro every battle u’ve been in u’ve lost & it’s a shame cuz i like u
next bout ur losing is to ur girl who i’ve been laying the pipe to
she wants to run away w/ me, can’t wait to see u to mention it
so u’ll come home to an apartment so bare u’d think ryu was renting it
sorry broham u’re not gonna win
for Shaman to even think he might? must be on that ayahuasca again
this hippie fag is wack, the fuck r u doing in battle rap?
i’d’ve thought wood stroking & sucking mushroom tips would be more nya natural habitat
add to the fact, this hermit freak can’t attract tail
if a chick ever put hermits on u it’s to try’n escape ur assault on the back trails
this guy’s a dud. straight bore, never livens up
only time u see Sham’rock is him wobbling home from an Irish Pub
i stay spraying triggers, flaying figures, somebody save this wigger
if it’s beef on sight? you gettin ya ass kicked like verseman saying n****r
i’ll Undertake the task of Tombstoning this Heel’s fam line
so run or Face the wrath, fued’s culminate in the Steel if ur one of ‘man kind
Howl at me…

references:
line 4 - bare ryu is a battler on this site who is feuding with Shaman, judging by votes each have cast against one another in recent battles.
line 5 - ayuhuasca is a psychoactive drink used in shamanistic ceremonies.
line 14 - HdotVerseman is a member whose account got banned for saying a no no word during a troll a thon.
last bar - Undertaker & Mankind are two wrestling legends whose feud culminated in a Hell in a Cell Steel Cage Match Undertaker won via Tombstone finisher. Also, Heel & Face are wrestling terms for antagonist & protagonist, respectively.

[TheShaman]

Good stuff. Just for the record, I'm not feuding with anyone on this site, hehe.

[Virbius]

Cool battle. I liked this Jack way more than what I saw from him in his last battle. Shaman seems to have developed his skills even more too.

I liked Jack’s Sham rock line quite a lot. As for the pick of the bunch from Shaman, Jack’ll-land-on was hard, and the 2001 Hal line was actually fire.

Good form, I preferred TheShaman’s bars overall but I enjoyed both.

Vote- TheShaman

[Virbius]

Cool battle. I liked this Jack way more than what I saw from him in his last battle. Shaman seems to have developed his skills even more too.

I liked Jack’s Sham rock line quite a lot. As for the pick of the bunch from Shaman, Jack’ll-land-on was hard, and the 2001 Hal line was actually fire.

Good form, I preferred TheShaman’s bars overall but I enjoyed both.

Vote- TheShaman

[miracle]

I’ll tell u what shaman, I like ur choice of words.. not every line hit and some was a little filler ish but ur choice of words made it better.. like ur opener, not hard hitting but cool, Alec line was weak to but I see where u was going… jackll land line was tough good one there..rhymes are polished was self hypeish but cool.. the rest just needed more sting to it.. every punch has to hit the person ur facing.. not a bad verse tho decent read. Jack had apartment so bare was an ok start not hard hitting but a jab I liked where u was going u could have done more tho..wood stroking n mushrooms was alright .. I liked the hermits wordplay.. thought it could have been flipped harder but still a cool wordplay.. shamrock was ok ..last two were mild but jabbed..

Overall I gotta give it to jack.. it’s a even match up but I just think jack had more going on and more attempts with less filler


Vote JACK

[Jack Hallows]

one of the poll votes for me up top is invalid, not that they determine who wins, but i figured i’d let it be known. i couldn’t see the poll until i voted so just subtract 1 from whatever my final tally is on the poll.

Up.

[TheShaman]

^ Same.

Noone's voting? Lol. I've got 0-1 on my profile, which is ridiculous, cuz I killed like 20 cats in the cyphers.

[bare ryu]

cool battle

shaman -

I'll wrap lassos round Jack Hallow's neck and snap it on the scaffold.
I Heard he lost the Depth, so now he'll be back like Jack Sparrow.
like the angle just doesnt sting as much for an opener
But he lost his head. Talking shit with the Headless Horseman.
It's just an act, yo. The bullets aren't real. Ask Alec Baldwin.
im getting a read on your accents. this was clever though, would have preferred something more direct
You're a sexual predator. Like Epstein, Diddy, Woody Allen, Jackson.
Must be Hallow's Eve, cuz there's fire in the hole Jack'll-­land-in.
this was your best punch so far. like the wordplay and fits considering your accent
You play a character. Marilyn Manson. Plus you suck on the radio.
This pedophile should have a rib removed to perform autofellatio.
marilyn manson dick sucking bars are a bit played, plus the angle is a bit of a stretch
I blast through on rocket ships. But this whack dude's monotonous.
This is 2001: A Space Oddyssey when Hal loses consciousness.
cool wordplay, solid punch
You're a phantom with no opera, bitch. A statue from Acropolis.
My rhymes are polished, like in the future by data archeologists.
cool angle. this is a decent bar but again im hoping for something more direct. this is more a swag/flow bar
You don't exist like I'm a solipsist. You're sleepy, filled with hollow tips.
Your world is meaningless so you create havoc: Dostoyevsky's Nihilists.
the rhyme scheme's not hitting in my read, even taking ur accent into account. really creative angle, would havel like a little more connection to jack and the nihilist concept in the setup
I just keep my distance and enjoy watching shit burn like arsonists.
That's why I'm going light on you, Jack.. You asked for this.
decent closer

bro every battle u’ve been in u’ve lost & it’s a shame cuz i like u
next bout ur losing is to ur girl who i’ve been laying the pipe to
decent opener could have done a bit more to flesh out the angle. just feels like an "im fucking ur bitch" bar but without the flips to make it work
she wants to run away w/ me, can’t wait to see u to mention it
so u’ll come home to an apartment so bare u’d think ryu was renting it
i thought this was pretty clean. just to clarify, im not beefing with shaman or anything just had some bars lined up for him.
sorry broham u’re not gonna win
for Shaman to even think he might? must be on that ayahuasca again
this was cool
this hippie fag is wack, the fuck r u doing in battle rap?
i’d’ve thought wood stroking & sucking mushroom tips would be more nya natural habitat
good execution on the concept
add to the fact, this hermit freak can’t attract tail
if a chick ever put hermits on u it’s to try’n escape ur assault on the back trails
nice flip, way to make the connection with the wordplay on the setup
this guy’s a dud. straight bore, never livens up
only time u see Sham’rock is him wobbling home from an Irish Pub
good worplay, fit seemlessly on the punch
i stay spraying triggers, flaying figures, somebody save this wigger
if it’s beef on sight? you gettin ya ass kicked like verseman saying n****r
cool reference, solid punch but not as hard as youd want for a near-closer
i’ll Undertake the task of Tombstoning this Heel’s fam line
so run or Face the wrath, fued’s culminate in the Steel if ur one of ‘man kind
slick word association. tbh though didnt hit too hard for me as i prefer something more personal or direct in the closer

pretty good battle. im not a shaman hater or anything. my main grievance against him before was stylistic, at most. but reading this battle shows that hes become more adjusted to this format. i think his punches would benefit from being more direct, but hes managed to make a solid verse out of his slick, jabby style. shaman's wordplay ability imo is slept on.

jack, i think you showed up with a well structured verse with a more orthodox style. your punches were delivered to the stylistic standard, to your advantage. you were able to flesh out ur angels well, at least for the most part, and delivered a good amount of sting.

mvgt - jack

[daveDILLY]

this jawn was pretty good
jack was stronger wit the punches imo
i fukd wit shams flow but the punches need more power
winner jack

[mal diction]

Shaman's verse for the most part had a smooth flow. the rest of the aspects: punchlines/wordplay/personals, were missing.


Jack, on-the-other-hand, had better wordplay ... puns were iight but better the Shaman's


v-jack

[Jack Hallows]

4-1. nice battle Shaman. i like how we said “light sparring” & immediately started calling each other all sorts of pedophile & rapist .. some people just wouldn’t understand.

always a pleasure to trade bars with you fammo. ever wanna do this again or torch some niggas in 2’s just howl.