RW WK5: Slayerr. vs Unfukwitable (SLAYER W)

[Bag Mandela]

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Regular Battle
Bars due Wednesday 27th November
Public voting closes Friday 29th November
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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6 lines each (doesn’t have to be 3 bars with a set up, punch format, you have creative freedom)

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Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.
Rebuttals, late drops (unless you have a 24hr ext) & no shows are an instant loss.

@Slayerr. @Unfukwitable

[Slayerr.]

Roll up my ganger smoke with lean vapour, u look on in envy wanting to attack my nose
Coz Bag gave me that green paper N you’re still begging on the street for a pack of those

Ducking me, you cunt, I can’t gloat when I make u bleed
Coz I ain’t seen you in two months, like a vote in the 1-2 league

So I won’t waste another bar, I take ur mudda hard
N finger pluck that bitch like a rusty guitar

[Bag Mandela]

Roll up my ganger smoke with lean vapour, u look on in envy wanting to attack my nose Lol specific focal point of the attack
Coz Bag gave me that green paper N you’re still begging on the street for a pack of those original green rizzla angle, nice

Ducking me, you cunt, I can’t gloat when I make u bleed
Coz I ain’t seen you in two months, like a vote in the 1-2 league unfortunately accurate

So I won’t waste another bar, I take ur mudda hard
N finger pluck that bitch like a rusty guitarI like that this is left open to interpretation, could mean you wear gloves to avoid getting your fingers covers in manky shit, could mean in expectation of a metallic-smelling residue being left behind

Could tell you knew he was gonna no show but still brought some decent bars so salute. Open for feedback.

[Virbius]

Good shit Slayerr!

Nice to see an unashamedly british bar about green papers. For those outside of the UK, ‘a green paper is a consultation document that the UK government or European Commission uses to gather feedback on policy proposals’. He’s insulting Unf’s American patriotism by saying that he’s desperate to be included in discussions regarding british politics.

Best not finger pluck a rusty guitar as it could cause the strings to snap. Far better to cleanse it with plenty of white vinegar and a wire brush, which is, incidentally, the recommended method for cleaning Unf’s mum’s cunt.

[FaQEyeReddit]

Lol if I didn't read the votes I'd have been like eh for that bar but otherwise overall seems like a decent drop from slayer for sure. Personal critique I'd say if like a deeper duality in the punches I think the vote 1-2 league was clever I just think slayer could hit even harder especially if it's scheming.. great wp wish I was British because I like the layers just didn't really catch it at first without expo

[Virbius]

great wp wish I was British because I like the layers just didn't really catch it at first without expo

Lmao sorry I was lying. Green papers can mean the political thing, but in this case he meant a green pack of rizlas. They’re papers for rolling your own cigarettes.

[FaQEyeReddit]

lmao you brits will think us yanks are too literal now..