Ransom Writers Chat

[Bag Mandela]

Semi final is up, @Virbius let me know if you want a GPT battle

[Jack Hallows]

I spent so long on the toilet whilst voting on the virb and jack battle that by time I stood up my pins and needles needed about 10 mins to sort themselves out

the only votes i trust are votes coming from those who vote while shitting lmao.

my niggas my bad i ain’t get to vote, it’s not for lack of trying. been swamped between my parents move & my own personal obligations so i been literally falling asleep tryna write votes & verses. i almost missed the deadline for posting my last verse due to this lmao.

i’m determined to see everything through though, i just gotta lock down some recreational time so i can enjoy the craft, cuz i the last thing i’d want is to for this exhaustion to start making me feel like writing is a burden.

oh and without further ado.. the video that Bag was talking about lol:

[Virbius]

Oh you nearly fell asleep writing your verse? What a coincidence, I nearly fell asleep reading it.

J/k, shit was fire. I thought you might’ve won that round. That vid’s nuts too, thanks for sharing. What a performance. Is that a Stoupe beat? Sounds like it’d fit on JMT Visions of Gandhi album (or a Cannibus Rip The Jacker instrumental I guess).

[Slayerr.]

I’ve had very little motivation all tourney but that virb jack battle has given me an itch @Bag Mandela fancy an exhibition match or something?


Also if anyone wants a video battle soon hit me up

[Bag Mandela]

I’ve had very little motivation all tourney but that virb jack battle has given me an itch @Bag Mandela fancy an exhibition match or something?


Also if anyone wants a video battle soon hit me up

Yeah I'm down for an exhibition, I've got a load of shit to do tonight but I'll post it up tomorrow.
@Jack Hallows holy shit I didn't think you'd actually drop it haha a lot of people would've dropped that the first chance they got, gotta respect the modesty. I'll stick to my word and drop this cringeu as fuck vid soon as I find it, it'll at least give Slayerr. something to cook me for

[mal diction]

how many ppl know what "cut the fat" means?

"Cut the fat" means to remove or reduce unnecessary or wasteful elements, often used in the context of streamlining a business or project, or in writing to make it more concise. It can also refer to eliminating non-essential parts of something, like trimming fat off meat.

You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
...

or the meaning of "shot"(drink) and "bar"(club) in this line:

Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.

The Faq’s are, you’re wack tard, while I’m unseen like a fenced-in backyard
You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
flowed nicely, the idea of kicking fatties out the whip is joke too

it's my fault but i didnt think an explanation would be need for most of my verse, but when some one points out something that doesnt make sense, in my rhyme, i gotta say something

@YG i started not to give you notice... but when you quote the explanation of my opponent's verse ,, it gets obvious that you didnt read the verses.. dont bother going back and forth.. you dissed me a few pages back in this chat.. you obviously think my site battle record means something... i know what i sound like and dont need you to co-sign

if you want to audio battle i'm all in... the mods can set it up in this forum

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the only votes i trust are votes coming from those who vote while shitting lmao.

my niggas my bad i ain’t get to vote, it’s not for lack of trying. been swamped between my parents move & my own personal obligations so i been literally falling asleep tryna write votes & verses. i almost missed the deadline for posting my last verse due to this lmao.

i’m determined to see everything through though, i just gotta lock down some recreational time so i can enjoy the craft, cuz i the last thing i’d want is to for this exhaustion to start making me feel like writing is a burden.

oh and without further ado.. the video that Bag was talking about lol:

Whoa!!! you blazed it

Jack!!! ...lol nerves and breath control dont mix..lol... i did something similar on my first tour in Iraq ...only I recited a poem

[EyeDealIstic]

how many ppl know what "cut the fat" means?



You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
...

or the meaning of "shot"(drink) and "bar"(club) in this line:

Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.



it's my fault but i didnt think an explanation would be need for most of my verse, but when some one points out something that doesnt make sense, in my rhyme, i gotta say something

@YG i started not to give you notice... but when you quote the explanation of my opponent's verse ,, it gets obvious that you didnt read the verses.. dont bother going back and forth.. you dissed me a few pages back in this chat.. you obviously think my site battle record means something... i know what i sound like and dont need you to co-sign

if you want to audio battle i'm all in... the mods can set it up in this forum

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Whoa!!! you blazed it

Jack!!! ...lol nerves and breath control dont mix..lol... i did something similar on my first tour in Iraq ...only I recited a poem

So you're the dude who played nude badmitton with @John Noir and six other dudes?

I was warned.

[TheShaman]

the only votes i trust are votes coming from those who vote while shitting lmao.

my niggas my bad i ain’t get to vote, it’s not for lack of trying. been swamped between my parents move & my own personal obligations so i been literally falling asleep tryna write votes & verses. i almost missed the deadline for posting my last verse due to this lmao.

i’m determined to see everything through though, i just gotta lock down some recreational time so i can enjoy the craft, cuz i the last thing i’d want is to for this exhaustion to start making me feel like writing is a burden.

oh and without further ado.. the video that Bag was talking about lol:

Yo, wtf am I watching? This is some next level shit, Jack. Smoking poppy seeds. Some crazy shit in there.
@Virbius , it's an Immortal Technique beat: Point of No Return. Produced by Southpaw, apparently. But yeah, definitely a good choice beat. Even with the beat title and being dropped in a war zone..
@Jack Hallows , it makes me wonder why you don't even use more gun bars or all this war related stuff in your rhymes, but at the same time the type of shit you see there is probably not something to use lightly for some online battle shit. Same goes for Mal, I guess, if he was in Iraq.

[FaQEyeReddit]

fuck im battling jack noooooooo hey this was fun i am srry i been so mia but lets close out strong

[Slayerr.]

the only votes i trust are votes coming from those who vote while shitting lmao.

my niggas my bad i ain’t get to vote, it’s not for lack of trying. been swamped between my parents move & my own personal obligations so i been literally falling asleep tryna write votes & verses. i almost missed the deadline for posting my last verse due to this lmao.

i’m determined to see everything through though, i just gotta lock down some recreational time so i can enjoy the craft, cuz i the last thing i’d want is to for this exhaustion to start making me feel like writing is a burden.

oh and without further ado.. the video that Bag was talking about lol:

Holy shit that was fire, you’ve got some serious lung capacity there boyo

[EyeDealIstic]

the only votes i trust are votes coming from those who vote while shitting lmao.

my niggas my bad i ain’t get to vote, it’s not for lack of trying. been swamped between my parents move & my own personal obligations so i been literally falling asleep tryna write votes & verses. i almost missed the deadline for posting my last verse due to this lmao.

i’m determined to see everything through though, i just gotta lock down some recreational time so i can enjoy the craft, cuz i the last thing i’d want is to for this exhaustion to start making me feel like writing is a burden.

oh and without further ado.. the video that Bag was talking about lol:

That's you in the video? Well, you win. That's the hardest rap video on the net.

[Bag Mandela]

how many ppl know what "cut the fat" means?



You’re truly a waste and there’s only room to cut the fat like a packed car
...

or the meaning of "shot"(drink) and "bar"(club) in this line:

Left with battle scars. Only one shot needed, cus I’m clever the way I handle bars.



it's my fault but i didnt think an explanation would be need for most of my verse, but when some one points out something that doesnt make sense, in my rhyme, i gotta say something

I think most people know what cutting / trimming the fat means, I thought it was a simile IE cutting the fat in that sense then being compared to kicking fat people out the car if its full, I fuck with it. I didn't think the shot / bars thing was too crazy & I've heard it before so not sure if I commented on it. I think I caught everything in both verses but we're in a shitty position of having a small amount of voters so you're not getting a full spectrum of viewpoints & style preferences.

[Slayerr.]

In text I don’t like punches that end on a similie, I’ve always found it the easy way out and less impactful than incorporating it into the flip but that’s just me. Works in audio coz u have less wiggle room

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That's you in the video? Well, you win. That's the hardest rap video on the net.

The only issue with it is it’s too pixelated to confirm he’s really black

[mal diction]

@Slayerr

you getting f***ed over like the ugly girl in a threesome

it's really not a simile when the predicate is metaphored or an entendre

[Ion Metatron]

Oh you nearly fell asleep writing your verse? What a coincidence, I nearly fell asleep reading it.

lol burn #Ouch..