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Thread: Solo (draft)

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! CLA203's Avatar
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    Solo (draft)

    Solo

    She tripping... Back to back texting again
    How many times do i have to lose my best friend... ME
    just jumping all the time
    Leap after leap off of instinct
    But they dont understand a life when youre not given the chance to think
    Or how i got sick when i did
    And these were all the things i went thru when he was doing his bid
    I wonder what wouldve happened if i died when i was shot
    Or didnt make it to the end
    Im not sure which man i loved
    The real one or the one he pretend
    And i cant comprehend, mend, or send him away
    what wouldve happened if i didnt show him that loyalty
    All the clues he gave me
    Thought we were friends first
    Its like me loving him just made him worse
    I guess thats a play i didnt know to rehearse
    He just didnt give a fuck about me he dont give a fuck how scary insanity be
    He dont give a fuck and now i dont either
    Solo again and i still say neither
    I dont want to love again cause your just gonna leave
    I dont wanna box with no gloves over a whore anymore i just need reprieve
    Cause southpaw was all me
    2 cars repoed in 1 year, one of them twice
    I lost every dime and i never got any advice
    And my fantasies that were supposed to be private was all in his head
    But he took them and me for a trick instead
    My heart so heavy right now its like straight led
    I cant sleep so i tried the other side of the bed
    Idk how to feel right now im just dead
    Solo i tend to always to roll though
    He dont know i heard every word that he said
    FUCK LOVE... GIVE ME BACK MY BODY AND BREAD
    I just wanna be happy love hurts
    Abd Im happier making money instead
    I want the Jordan 4 infrared (grey)
    Not a pain i cant get out of my heart or head
    Sleeping with the enemy, but im still one step ahead

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    Re: Solo (draft)

    Sounds like you've been hit with hard times and heartbreak. That's rough, and I can relate. It's not easy to wrote about personal issues so I applaud the bravery. Keep pushing, keep elevating. Focus on upping your vocab and the sophistication of your rhyme schemes.

    Solid effort.

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    Re: Solo (draft)

    This was very creative
    Emotions off the hook
    Keep up the good work

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